THE HEART
My young son draws a heart on a piece of paper for me to be his
Valentine.
The heart beats
inside his chest as he grows.
The heart hurts
from his first break-up.
Another Trifextra 33-word challenge. For more, click on the link above and read some amazing works.
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Something any mother can relate to :)
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done. Story of a boy growing up in 33 words!
ReplyDeleteSo so so so sweet... How does a mother heal her son's broken heart?
ReplyDeleteoh, I dread those future heartbreak days! my sons are just 8 and 6 right now..........
ReplyDeletenicely written!
best,
MOV
My heart will break along with my kids. Remembering that it's all a part of loving and living doesn't help much :)
ReplyDeleteI may be as upset over my son's first heartbreak as he will be.
ReplyDeleteHow true! Great use of the prompt!
ReplyDeleteHow we dread those upcoming days, even when ours are still little!
ReplyDeleteAh so true, very well done.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
And so, I'm sure, does yours for him when it happens.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully said. The young naive love that guides him later to a bittersweer message . You met the challenge well, thanks for sharing and keep trifecting !
ReplyDeleteAnd your heart follows right along after his. Thanks for playing along with us again this week. Please come on back for the new challenge tomorrow.
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