The wind whipped through Jason’s jumpsuit as he adjusted his
parachute for the hundredth time. He and
Noah had come out together. They held
hands and took their second leap as a couple.
This weekend we are challenging you to write 33 of your own words to build upon the following:
On the count of three...
*flails* This so sweet! X3
ReplyDeleteVery nice story.
ReplyDeleteAw, I like this a lot! Good take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteHoly cats. How interesting. Excellent storytelling in so few words!
ReplyDeleteHow great! I want to do this so bad!
ReplyDeleteVery sweet - Nicely said. Love the second leap.
ReplyDeleteI love the sentiment behind this and the matter of fact way you presented it. Very good!
ReplyDeleteI liked the description of the parachute jump, but the second leap part gave the story even more depth. Nice job!
ReplyDeletewith a lump in my throat I say ... lovely!
ReplyDeleteLove the second leap! Great way to tell an entire story in a few select words.
ReplyDeleteThey definitely don't just sit around and watch tv, that's for sure! :D
ReplyDeleteVery endearing :) Well done!
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