This is my entry into Trifecta's Trifextra. Want to read more entries? Yes? Then click on the picture above which is linked to the challenge. Go ahead. I triple dog dare you to.
Friday, August 17, 2012
TRIFEXTRA: WK 29
My small hands trembled as I laid the gun down at his feet. I finally exhaled knowing that he could never touch me again. His ending was the start of my new beginning.
This is my entry into Trifecta's Trifextra. Want to read more entries? Yes? Then click on the picture above which is linked to the challenge. Go ahead. I triple dog dare you to.
This is my entry into Trifecta's Trifextra. Want to read more entries? Yes? Then click on the picture above which is linked to the challenge. Go ahead. I triple dog dare you to.
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8 comments:
Bring on the sequel. Nicely done!
Perfect. This ending lures the reader into reading the next story!
You packed a lot of information and emotion into your 33 words. I'm breathing a sigh of relief and picturing the scene clearly.
Very appealing
Oh, I like this. It reminds me a little bit of the movie,What's Love Got to Do with It? Well done. :D
Wow, poignant! Small hands? Child molested by dad? Great job!
What's cool about this is that it can be both and ending and beginning. Nice work.
Thanks for playing along with us again this week. Please come on back tomorrow for the new challenge.
I love how buisnesslike she sounds! I imagine we have seen this coming for the past 200 pages.
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