The wind whipped through Jason’s jumpsuit as he adjusted his
parachute for the hundredth time. He and
Noah had come out together. They held
hands and took their second leap as a couple.
This weekend we are challenging you to write 33 of your own words to build upon the following:
On the count of three...
12 comments:
*flails* This so sweet! X3
Very nice story.
Aw, I like this a lot! Good take on the prompt!
Holy cats. How interesting. Excellent storytelling in so few words!
How great! I want to do this so bad!
Very sweet - Nicely said. Love the second leap.
I love the sentiment behind this and the matter of fact way you presented it. Very good!
I liked the description of the parachute jump, but the second leap part gave the story even more depth. Nice job!
with a lump in my throat I say ... lovely!
Love the second leap! Great way to tell an entire story in a few select words.
They definitely don't just sit around and watch tv, that's for sure! :D
Very endearing :) Well done!
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