Friday, October 12, 2012

THE LEAP - TRIFEXTRA: WK 37

THE LEAP


The wind whipped through Jason’s jumpsuit as he adjusted his parachute for the hundredth time.  He and Noah had come out together.  They held hands and took their second leap as a couple.



This weekend we are challenging you to write 33 of your own words to build upon the following:
On the count of three...


12 comments:

Draug said...

*flails* This so sweet! X3

Debra Ann Elliott said...

Very nice story.

Laura Eitniear said...

Aw, I like this a lot! Good take on the prompt!

Anonymous said...

Holy cats. How interesting. Excellent storytelling in so few words!

Bo said...

How great! I want to do this so bad!

Kelly Garriott Waite said...

Very sweet - Nicely said. Love the second leap.

lumdog2012 said...

I love the sentiment behind this and the matter of fact way you presented it. Very good!

Anonymous said...

I liked the description of the parachute jump, but the second leap part gave the story even more depth. Nice job!

karen said...

with a lump in my throat I say ... lovely!

Kimberly said...

Love the second leap! Great way to tell an entire story in a few select words.

Anonymous said...

They definitely don't just sit around and watch tv, that's for sure! :D

Anonymous said...

Very endearing :) Well done!