Friday, August 10, 2012

TRIFEXTRA - WK 28

THE HEART


My young son draws a heart on a piece of paper for me to be his Valentine.

The heart beats inside his chest as he grows.

The heart hurts from his first break-up.





Another Trifextra 33-word challenge.  For more, click on the link above and read some amazing works.

A note to other Trifecta participants:

I'm new to this and want to thank you all for accepting me into your group.  I'm forever amazed at the talent within this group.  Thank you for amazing me more each week.

12 comments:

Carrie said...

Something any mother can relate to :)

lumdog2012 said...

Very nicely done. Story of a boy growing up in 33 words!

Marie Nicole said...

So so so so sweet... How does a mother heal her son's broken heart?

MOV said...

oh, I dread those future heartbreak days! my sons are just 8 and 6 right now..........

nicely written!

best,
MOV

jannatwrites said...

My heart will break along with my kids. Remembering that it's all a part of loving and living doesn't help much :)

Tara R. said...

I may be as upset over my son's first heartbreak as he will be.

Tessa said...

How true! Great use of the prompt!

Sandra said...

How we dread those upcoming days, even when ours are still little!

Anna :o] said...

Ah so true, very well done.


Anna :o]

Jester Queen said...

And so, I'm sure, does yours for him when it happens.

braintomahawk said...

Wonderfully said. The young naive love that guides him later to a bittersweer message . You met the challenge well, thanks for sharing and keep trifecting !

Trifecta said...

And your heart follows right along after his. Thanks for playing along with us again this week. Please come on back for the new challenge tomorrow.