Bring on the sequel. Nicely done!
Perfect. This ending lures the reader into reading the next story!
You packed a lot of information and emotion into your 33 words. I'm breathing a sigh of relief and picturing the scene clearly.
Oh, I like this. It reminds me a little bit of the movie,What's Love Got to Do with It? Well done. :D
Wow, poignant! Small hands? Child molested by dad? Great job!
What's cool about this is that it can be both and ending and beginning. Nice work. Thanks for playing along with us again this week. Please come on back tomorrow for the new challenge.
I love how buisnesslike she sounds! I imagine we have seen this coming for the past 200 pages.
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