Friday, August 17, 2012

TRIFEXTRA: WK 29

My small hands trembled as I laid the gun down at his feet. I finally exhaled knowing that he could never touch me again. His ending was the start of my new beginning.




This is my entry into Trifecta's Trifextra.  Want to read more entries?  Yes?  Then click on the picture above which is linked to the challenge.  Go ahead.  I triple dog dare you to.

8 comments:

According to Mags... said...

Bring on the sequel. Nicely done!

lumdog2012 said...

Perfect. This ending lures the reader into reading the next story!

hoofprintsinmygarden said...

You packed a lot of information and emotion into your 33 words. I'm breathing a sigh of relief and picturing the scene clearly.

Bubbling Arroyo said...

Very appealing

lindavernon said...

Oh, I like this. It reminds me a little bit of the movie,What's Love Got to Do with It? Well done. :D

Tessa said...

Wow, poignant! Small hands? Child molested by dad? Great job!

Trifecta said...

What's cool about this is that it can be both and ending and beginning. Nice work.
Thanks for playing along with us again this week. Please come on back tomorrow for the new challenge.

The Gal Herself said...

I love how buisnesslike she sounds! I imagine we have seen this coming for the past 200 pages.